Tuesday, February 3, 2009

Pain

What is this feeling?
This is Pain.

Why do I feel so bad?
This really makes me mad.
This is pain.

What can cause this?
This witch ruins bliss.
This feeling I will not miss.
This is pain.

Who can be this cruel?
Too use this as a tool.
Who believes this is cool?
Could this be school?
This is pain.

What is this feeling?
This is pain.

2 comments:

Brii333 said...

hmmmm...not so sure about this one. it seems like you were just trying to make it rhyme instead of make it the way it needed to be. I think if you played with it and focused less on the rhyming, it would be better.

TonyCW08 said...

i agree

but format work for school is format work right