Tuesday, September 23, 2008

Today Is Poem

Today Is
Today is finding a quarter on the street
Today is ripping your zipper picking it up
Today is finishing a hard painting
Today is spilling coffee on that painting
Today is making a great Friend
Today they stab your back
Today is taking a good swim
Today the lightning strikes the lake
Today is lying in a soft bed
Today is not waking up

3 comments:

kitsune said...

i think you need a pocket full of sunshine, good poem though.

Sam:) said...

I think it was awesome:)
I was actually jusyt thinking about this poem haha.
NIIIIICE.

Brii333 said...

ouch. sounds like your day kinda sorta sucked a lot. i think this is a poem everybody can understand, and if they can't, then their lying to themselves. there isn't a person alive who hasn't had a day like that. seriously.

excellent poem. no constructive criticism needed.